Sounds pretty good. That is a nice melody, but maybe adding some reverb and a longer release time to the piano and some of your synths would really give the song some greater atmosphere. Or when you go the break, make the reverb longer on some of the pads. When you take the pads away cold-turkey during the breaks, the ambience drops somewhat. Otherwise, this was a nice listen. Some good stuff here. I like how the song really gets noticeably more intense later on. And like I said, adding atmosphere would really strengthen the peak.

Ok guys, I fixed up "ATONEMENT" and even worked on a new song while I was at it.  The new one is a dance, instrumental cover of "ROXANNE", a song made famous by The Police.

You can download both here:

http://www.mediafire.com/?nqnmm4zznfy

Download and leave suggestions, and I will head back to the studio tomorrow!