Hey guys,

Here is a new track I am working on, called "ATONEMENT".  So far I have spent about 3-4 days on it.  The melody came to me while daydreaming in Geology class and I subsequently opened Garageband to work on it.

Anyways, here is the track.  BEWARE:  It is over 10 minutes long.  The longest I have ever done.

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Please enjoy and leave feedback

Sounds pretty good. That is a nice melody, but maybe adding some reverb and a longer release time to the piano and some of your synths would really give the song some greater atmosphere. Or when you go the break, make the reverb longer on some of the pads. When you take the pads away cold-turkey during the breaks, the ambience drops somewhat. Otherwise, this was a nice listen. Some good stuff here. I like how the song really gets noticeably more intense later on. And like I said, adding atmosphere would really strengthen the peak.

Many thanks and appreciation.

I still have the file from which I made the songs so just a few fixes from your suggestions and some finishing touches, and we should be good to go.

Keep the feedback coming, folks!

Ok guys, I fixed up "ATONEMENT" and even worked on a new song while I was at it.  The new one is a dance, instrumental cover of "ROXANNE", a song made famous by The Police.

You can download both here:

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Download and leave suggestions, and I will head back to the studio tomorrow!

I fixed ATONEMENT and put up two new tracks:  "MIDNIGHT SPEEDWAY" and "NIGHT STORM".  Check them out at www.myspace.com/djranzmusicworld